You have made a good start here and have managed to cover the relevant sections needed. For the most part you use examples and explain techniques used.
To improve: - how is the ad realist? - what do you mean by model? Think carefully about the wording you use throughout - use more media terms throughout and make sure you explain them fully - look again at your demographic slide and think more about the social profiling and add more about audience as a whole - look at the order of the slides, does it flow?
You also said about more information on Ofcom and the ASA also a different code that is more appropriate, also to make a reference list which I have done both of these.
Alana,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a good start here and have managed to cover the relevant sections needed. For the most part you use examples and explain techniques used.
To improve:
- how is the ad realist?
- what do you mean by model? Think carefully about the wording you use throughout
- use more media terms throughout and make sure you explain them fully
- look again at your demographic slide and think more about the social profiling and add more about audience as a whole
- look at the order of the slides, does it flow?
EllieB
You also said about more information on Ofcom and the ASA also a different code that is more appropriate, also to make a reference list which I have done both of these.
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