Monday, 9 February 2015

Prezi Vaseline Advert Analysis


  1. Alana,

    You have made a good start here and have managed to cover the relevant sections needed. For the most part you use examples and explain techniques used.

    To improve:
    - how is the ad realist?
    - what do you mean by model? Think carefully about the wording you use throughout
    - use more media terms throughout and make sure you explain them fully
    - look again at your demographic slide and think more about the social profiling and add more about audience as a whole
    - look at the order of the slides, does it flow?


  2. You also said about more information on Ofcom and the ASA also a different code that is more appropriate, also to make a reference list which I have done both of these.