You have made a good start but we do need more detail throughout to get the higher grades. You have said what the technology is but we need much more on how it works, who provides it / specific examples of content and what the pros and cons of each are. Also mention why we call certain technologies consumer goods - why aren't all cameras and editing applications for consumers? and add more images of logos and technologies throughout.
Alana,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a good start but we do need more detail throughout to get the higher grades. You have said what the technology is but we need much more on how it works, who provides it / specific examples of content and what the pros and cons of each are. Also mention why we call certain technologies consumer goods - why aren't all cameras and editing applications for consumers? and add more images of logos and technologies throughout.
Ellie